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Standing here,
Watching you go behind my back,
Watching this memory that stings too bad,
But will always be a painful reminder in my heat

Chorus
(Hey, Hey) I'm so lost without you,
(Hey, Hey) But I just cannot doubt you,
(Hey, Hey) You went behind my back my back it's true,
(Hey) But I can't live without you

The look...

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Let Me Live My Life

This is too much,
Leave me alone,
Just shut up,
I'm tired so go

Chorus
I have feelings,
Just cause you think you're better,
Does not exactly mean you are,
It don't mean you're a shining star

Leave me be,
I'm tired of listening to the same old junk.
Nothing ever means wh...

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This is in writing, but yeah. xD And part was definitely suicidal (a part not based on me), so um, I'm editing that part out.

So fed up, I insist.
Staring longingly -edit!-at the sky-end of edit-.
In my heart, a constant distress,
But never brave enough to end the pain.

Then you come in, and my eyes mist.
I turn away...

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Here is a link for a song I wrote. I recorded it on a digital 8-track work-station. I copied and pasted the drum parts, played guitar, bass and sang the lyrics. I then sang the back-up vocals and added the lead guitar. Please leave a comment....good or bad...http://www.muziboo.com/johnfinizio/music/theyll-say

Friends.... or More?
Verse 1
We've been friends since forever,
But now that we're older,
I feel different about you,
I see more in you then I ever have,

Chorus
My stomach turns when I hear your voice
My cheeks burn when I see your face
And all I have to say is
I love you

Verse 2
You always chee...

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The Tiger



Take my hand,

Together we dance,

We'd be perfect,

We just connect



Chorus

Spin me around,

My heart feels so sound ,

You're like the tiger baby,

You're makin me go crazy



Not gonna fall over my b...

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Not Gone

I look at him with a twinkle in my eyes,
He smiles at me and says, "I love another girl,"
I fight back tears and say, "That's great,"
He walks away and I wanna say

Chorus
Boy you're makin' a big mistake,
Can't you see it's me who loves you,
I try to move on,
But the pain's not gone
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Sorry

All I want is to be and friend,
But you don't see it,
I will try to relate,
But I may not be it

Chorus
I'm gonna fight against myself,
So we can be friends now,
I know you act like you don't mind,
But deep down you really care

I'm gonna be a better friend,
So you can be happy,
I'm go...

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