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1 Jump.......... on Fri Nov 04, 2011 3:11 pm


I'm gonna fall
I'm at the edge of this cliff
All I can do now is jump
What is there left for me to do?
Besides you

Running toward the edge
My only other choice
Either that or stay in this wasteland
This toxic dump
Where nothing can exist
But hopelessness and sadness
I either jump or here I get stuck

I'm yelling for someone to catch me
Underneath the ground which I jump
But who would care enough
To come around and help me
My life's not worth that much

So, I wrote that yesterday during free period. What do you think? Should I finish it?

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2 Re: Jump.......... on Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:58 pm

Hmm, with a few music choices and chorus alterations, I can make this into a song in no time flat.

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3 Re: Jump.......... on Fri Nov 04, 2011 8:41 pm


Yeah, I'm planning to do so...

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4 Re: Jump.......... on Sat Nov 05, 2011 9:59 am

Can't wait to see that.

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