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Here Comes The Rain

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1 Here Comes The Rain on Fri Nov 04, 2011 4:57 pm

Narrative: You know you’re my best friend, right? Well, I have a confession. I’m worried about you.

(Flute plays; Fake rain falls)

Ever since she came, you have been taking small steps away from me. I have been a victim of this before. After he dumped her, he left scarred. I can’t let you do this. She leaves. Here comes the pain. You leave. Here comes the rain.

(Thunder)

Verse 1: How dare I stay that, I know
You hate me, please do not go
I would walk a thousand miles
I saw you holding hands
I heard you just made plans
I have never seen that smile
In a while

You make me wish I had someone
Maybe it’s because it’s you
You taught me everything I had done
Now, what do I do
Have I ever told you
You are beautiful

Chorus: It’s hard to know who loves you
Especially if you feel this way
I don’t want to cause trouble
From the other day

She came and took you away from me
This is not hard to see
That I was a victim before
She’s gone, here comes the pain
You’re gone, here comes the rain

Verse 2: I look, you walk away
I open my mouth, she says your name
I can’t help but cry
Everywhere I turn to
I learn more truth from you
I think I want to die

I get down more on my knees
Begging this simple prayer
Oh never leave me alone please
Then, you ain’t there
I’ll never tell you
That you’re beautiful

It’s hard to know who loves you
Especially if you feel this way
I don’t want to cause trouble
From the other day

She came and took you away from me
This is not hard to see
That I was a victim before
She’s gone, here comes the pain
You’re gone, here comes the rain

Bridge 1: The rain keeps pouring down
The rivers and streets are flooding now

(Instrumental)

It’s hard to know who loves you
Especially if you feel this way
I don’t want to cause trouble
From the other day

She came and took you away from me
This is not hard to see
That I was a victim before
She’s gone, here comes the pain
You’re gone, here comes the rain

Bridge 2: Did I ever tell you
That you’re beautiful

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2 Re: Here Comes The Rain on Fri Nov 04, 2011 8:46 pm

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That's awesome! It's just one of those things that I wish I could hear.

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3 Re: Here Comes The Rain on Sat Nov 05, 2011 10:00 am

Maybe I will make a vid for this.

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