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    Admin
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    Not Gone!!!!

    Post by Admin on Sat Aug 29, 2009 12:07 am

    Not Gone

    I look at him with a twinkle in my eyes,
    He smiles at me and says, "I love another girl,"
    I fight back tears and say, "That's great,"
    He walks away and I wanna say

    Chorus
    Boy you're makin' a big mistake,
    Can't you see it's me who loves you,
    I try to move on,
    But the pain's not gone

    I look at you talking to her,
    She gives me the evil eye,
    I walk away,
    You catch up and say

    "What's wrong? I thought I was your friend,"
    I look at you and say, "You were,"
    You so confused as I turn around,
    You walk away to be with her...clueless

    Chorus

    Bridge
    I think about you,
    And wonder what I saw,
    Just another guy,
    On the face of my mind

    Chorus

    You look at me your eyes red,
    I know what happened,
    "Sorry boy but I've moved on,
    And the pain is gone."

    Inspiration: This is about my cousin's experience."

    shadowsowner888

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    Re: Not Gone!!!!

    Post by shadowsowner888 on Sat Aug 29, 2009 5:51 pm

    Sad Aww, that's really sad! Nice job, Hulie.

    (Btw, is there supposed to not be a "go to newest posts" button anymore? xD)

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    Re: Not Gone!!!!

    Post by Admin on Sun Aug 30, 2009 5:26 pm

    Thanks! Smile

    Well, no. I have it but I guess that something happened. I am trying to figure out how to get this back.

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    Re: Not Gone!!!!

    Post by shadowsowner888 on Tue Sep 01, 2009 12:16 pm

    Okay. xD I was wondering what happened!

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    Re: Not Gone!!!!

    Post by Admin on Sat Sep 05, 2009 3:58 am

    I honestly have no idea! Jeez! I think I am going back to the MJ!

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